Sun and Sand

CS-Your hand drawn doodles came out great!

July 15, 2008

Fun and cute!! Love the palm tree!

June 08, 2008

CS: You hand-drew the flowers and tree?? Those look SOOO great!! I love the orange strip of patterned paper beneath the 3 photos, too, that's a nice touch!! I would make the title a bit larger, but other than that, I think these elements all work so well together! A very fun page, well done!!

June 04, 2008

CS~This turned out amazing!!!! The hand drawn flowers and tree is to die for. the only changes I would make are to enlarge the focal picture so it really stands out...and maybe use photo corners instead of a mat on it. And the title should be bigger

June 04, 2008

*CS* I love the flowers!! If you are up for re-doing the layout I'd suggest (1) pulling the larger picture to the right and down a bit, then spreading the quote out onto fewer lines under the photo. Not sure if you should change the color of the text or not. (2) Make the title bigger - to fill the upper left space. (3) Maybe put the journaling block to the left of the large photo after moving it (or else incorporate the blue journaling in another way). I think all the elements work well but woulod work well with a little re-ararnging.

June 04, 2008

*CS* I LOVE the hand drawn business! You just rock at that!! Ok ok, let me gather myself. I love this all on white like that and the touch of pp. I agree the title needs to be larger and the page needs something to link it all together. Something as simple as doodles, maybe in to form of dots and dashes or something, that carries your eye along the page. I don't know maybe not that but something

June 03, 2008

*CS* This is lovely LauriB! I love your hand-drawn elements. My first thought is that you need to somehow link the various elements on the page. Could you perhaps extend some of the swirls from the top corner down and around the frames and maybe the journaling too? I think a bigger title might have more impact too. I love seeing this artist side of you - great, fun page.

June 03, 2008

love it xx

June 02, 2008

this is a lot of fun!

June 01, 2008

*CS* I absolutely LOVE your flowers. You really should hand draw more often! Your title seems to be a little too small tough. And I'm not a big fan of your blue journaling. I would just have shown the quote and added the extra journaling on a hidden tag under the main pic. Oh and did I tell you I really like the bright colours on the white background?!? And the little touch of pp behind the three smaller pics? I added your LO to my faves to maybe steal some aspects of it in the future. LOL.